stripperella

Her back is too curved, and as a result, her stomach is as well. In the cartoon Stripperella was skinny (but somehow not anorexic), but did not have a spine-snapping, or probably a medically severe, excruciating, anterior pelvic tilt. Her skirt is a also on the bright side in contrast to her clothing, which matched in color in the cartoon, regardless of the areas of light (I think..).

Still! You kept the drawing clean, and in the end product, never went outside of the lines. Also, it looks like you blended the watercolor quite well, seeing how there aren't any noticeable blotches or suddenly dark areas. In sum, you had control when using the watercolor. That is commendable.